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''Crime and Punishment'': Murderer's scream

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"Crime and Punishment: Murderer's scream"
- 11.08.2012

The 100 Themes Challenge: # 98 - Scream





*** WORK DESCRIPTION ***

Another fan art drawing for "Crime and Punishment". Purely symbolic face expression manifests the inner suffering of the man who commited the crime. Raskolnikov, as the person of a very strong personality, decides to murder to check his theory about extraordinary people and to make himself sure of his worth. However, even his courage and intellect turned out to be insufficient to save him from moral isolation and awareness of the criminal's seal.

Enjoy! :)





*** Please read before adding the critique ***

Hello everyone. :) I would like to know your opinion about my work and my drawing style as a whole. One thing I want to ask you for is not to be rude to me as far as it's my fourth attempt to draw a human portrait ever and I'm just a beginner.

Thank you in advance. :) :handshake:

P.S.: All the shading, shapes and proportions are the result of my reference.


*** Inspired by "Crime and Punishment" by Fyodor Dostoyevsky and its Soviet screening from 1969. ***

Starring:
Georgi Taratorkin.


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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Well, for a fourth attempt, this is certainly extraordinary. Anatomically, it's very well done, and this is an extremely difficult angle from which to draw the face and head. The expression is powerful; I can really sense his anguish. It's a challenge to capture such emotion, and you've done that well.

I think another poster commented on the benefit of some darker lines and shading, and I agree. Especially around the mouth and eyes, a stronger emphasis on the creases in his face would be effective. Likewise, the tendons in his neck could be more strongly delineated, as this would give the impression of him being tensed up and straining to release his anxiety. Lastly, the ear looks a little off; that very dark crescent shape doesn't seem to tie into the rest of the contours.

The other comment I have is on the general vision of Raskolnikov as screaming in anguish. It seems sort of out-of-character for him. Sure he was tormented, but I think of him as more brooding and sullen. He was frustrated with himself, but throughout much of the book, he seems more confused and erratic than ready to let out a tormented scream. It's not until the end that he really sees the wrong in what he did, but that is actually a sort of peaceful realization.

That's just my interpretation. There's certainly lots of room for discussion. It is truly a wonderful picture.